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| syn | Hi everyone | 08:25:13 |
 Dezponia | Hai | 09:29:46 |
 inphovore | I’ve been listening to the audio of Hellen Keller’s autobiography.
She’s freaking amazing
https://youtu.be/C55gdswQEms | 10:01:05 |
| inphovore | HELEN KELLER The Story of My Life | 10:01:29 |
| inphovore | Her expressions of sensory experience through language is phenomenal | 10:02:17 |
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| 86ul | Currently I am writing a essay for a course at my university. | 12:19:32 |
| 86ul | Any suggestion on how to write an good clear, compact, yet concrete essay? | 12:20:46 |
| 86ul | https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vtIzMaLkCaM&feature=youtu.be | 12:20:47 |
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 dor 🚪 | Roughly: Make an outline with the points/statements you want to assert. Keep it clear and concise at this point, no need for explanation and evidence yet. Once you have your outline, then sit down and expand on each point, explaining and giving evidence. Once done, put it away for a day or two. After you've had a break then come back and edit, cut unnecessary things, fix grammar and spelling. | 16:11:28 |
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| 86ul | Thanks dor 🚪, the dutch language has a word for that outline, which translated as something like a writing plan. But Wiki has only a dutch page for it... | 21:53:01 |
| 86ul | * Thanks dor 🚪, the dutch language has a word for that outline, which translated as something like a writing plan. But Wiki has only a dutch section for it... | 21:53:21 |
| 13 Dec 2020 |
| 86ul | Yesterday I rewrote that outline, which has 5 section, with each 3 subsections in which all I ask myself what the Question is for that part, the Argument and Goal (to argue, to inform, to relax, etc.) Then I also write some important tags for all these parts. At the end I ask myself again some general questions about my article, so that what I want to say, indeed that is what I have written. | 21:35:27 |
| 86ul | Today I rewrote my article based on the new outline that I made yesterday. | 21:38:01 |
